Definitely a good piece for someone just starting to write electronic music. IMO the main theme felt a little cliche and overdone a bit. Try a little more variation next time, maybe add some other voices and countermelodies over the arpeggiated accompaniment. Good job again
This is honestly one of the best songs I've heard in quite a while, and the poem that went along with it just completely captured all the emotions that went into this. Fantastic job!
Pretty good, had that game feeling to it but still retained that Hispanic vibe. However, the sound felt a little too harsh for me. Try to balance the eq a little bit better. Otherwise I think you're pretty good. Scouted you ^^
thank you. ya i noticed that about it too lol i am already working on a new song and this time i take extra time so it come out with better quality
This was pretty good. It has a really fun feeling, like some kids playing. I would recommend a little differentiation in the melody though. It starts to feel a little repetitive after awhile. Try a modulating (Changing the key) somewhere in there, or maybe change up the bassline a little bit! But other than that I really liked it. Check out some of my stuff if you have a chance, I write video game music too :)
Loved this! The breakdown at the beginning was perfect, though I felt the intro really emphasized the "synthetic-ness" so to speak, of the violin. I think adding something bassy in the background would really help with that intro. Nice work!
Really chill beat, I just sat back and relaxed while this was playing. Loops flawlessly. However, I felt there could have been a bit of differentiation in the chords. The only reason I gave you 3.5 stars is because the awkward rhythm in the chords makes it a little, and i mean a little, hard to get into when you first start it. All in all though, great job. I'll be keeping an eye out on new stuff ^^
Thanks man! More stuff coming.
This is AMAZING. I'm sooo sorry, my mouse spazzed and I accidentally gave you a zero star vote XD I love this though, so I hope you can forgive me! >_<
Haha it's no problem :) Thanks for the review anyways
I don't know what you would call this exactly... Steampunk? Whatever it is, it sounds fantastic. And listening to it while reading you description just made it that much better! Thanks for the song, can't wait for the next upload :D
Hahaha, well, close enough. I was aiming for cyberpunk. Thanks for the compliments! I'm scoring a couple of animations, so more's on the way!
I honestly can't find anything wrong with this loop. I can see it being used in the menu or title screen of a game. Great job!
It'd be awesome if that happened. Thank you.
I loved this, your piano work is fantastic. The only things keeping me from giving a full 5 stars is the almost abrupt ending. I feel like this could have been expanded much more. But what's here is still more than enough to get the feeling across. Great job!
Thanks! The more I listen to this song, the more I realize the ending is quite abrupt. Hopefully I'll get the inspiration to expand on this soon without loosing the feel of the song.
Thanks for the review!
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